Stories, with questions

“In the Land of the Free” and “The Loudest Voice”

Sui Sin Far, 1909, and Grace Paley, 1959 · two stories about a child, a family, and becoming American

The People’s Share · GED Reasoning Through Language Arts · reading fiction · two at a time

Part 1

Before you read: two stories about a child, a family, and becoming American

Two immigrant families, in stories printed fifty years apart, one Chinese in San Francisco and one Jewish in New York. In each, an American institution takes hold of a child. One story will break your heart. The other will make you laugh, and then make you think.

The older story, “In the Land of the Free,” is old enough to be free, so the whole of it is printed below: yours to read, print and keep. The newer one, “The Loudest Voice,” is still under copyright. The Library of America puts it online for free, so it stays on their site and this page links to it. Read the older one first.

The older one: “In the Land of the Free”

Written by
Sui Sin Far, the pen name of Edith Maude Eaton (1865–1914). Her father was English and her mother Chinese. She grew up in Montreal and worked as a typesetter, stenographer and reporter in Canada and the United States, including San Francisco. She was one of the first writers in North America to write about Chinese immigrants from the inside, with respect.
First printed
In 1909, and in her book Mrs. Spring Fragrance in 1912.
What happens
A Chinese mother arrives in San Francisco with her two-year-old son, to join her husband, a merchant who has lived there for years. The boy was born in China, and he has no papers.
Length
About 3,200 words, in four numbered parts. Allow 25 minutes to read it.
What was happening

In 1882, Congress passed the Chinese Exclusion Act. It stopped Chinese workers from coming into the United States. A few kinds of people, among them merchants, could still come, but every Chinese person entering the country had to carry papers proving who they were. Congress renewed the law, and then made it permanent. It was not repealed until 1943. The story calls the officials at the dock customs officers; the “U.S.C.” on their caps most likely stands for United States Customs.

A word about one word

The story uses the word “Chinaman.” In 1909 it was the ordinary word, and the author, whose own mother was Chinese, used it. Today it is an insult. It is left as she wrote it.

Words you will meet

thy, thou, thee, ’tisparagraph 1 onward
old words for “your,” “you” and “it is.” The author uses them when the family speaks Chinese, to set it apart from English.
sweetmeatparagraph 2
a candy
transportsparagraph 6
ships that carry soldiers
wharfparagraph 6
a dock
customs officerparagraph 8
an official who checks people and goods coming into a country
twenty moonsparagraph 30
twenty months
reproachedparagraph 36
blamed, in a hurt way
eloquent with painparagraph 36
saying a great deal of pain without many words
the completion of the moonparagraph 49
a celebration held when a baby is one month old
missionparagraph 61
a church-run home; here, one that cared for children
abacusparagraph 62
a counting frame with beads on wires, used for arithmetic
disconsolatelyparagraph 62
sadly, beyond comfort
solicitouslyparagraph 71
in a caring way (here, a show of caring)
ironicallyparagraph 98
saying one thing and meaning the opposite

The older one · yours to keep

In the Land of the Free


I

1“See, Little One—the hills in the morning sun. There is thy home for years to come. It is very beautiful and thou wilt be very happy there.”

2The Little One looked up into his mother’s face in perfect faith. He was engaged in the pleasant occupation of sucking a sweetmeat; but that did not prevent him from gurgling responsively.

3“Yes, my olive bud; there is where thy father is making a fortune for thee. Thy father! Oh, wilt thou not be glad to behold his dear face. ’Twas for thee I left him.”

4The Little One ducked his chin sympathetically against his mother’s knee. She lifted him on to her lap. He was two years old, a round, dimple-cheeked boy with bright brown eyes and a sturdy little frame.

5“Ah! Ah! Ah! Ooh! Ooh! Ooh!” puffed he, mocking a tugboat steaming by.

6San Francisco’s waterfront was lined with ships and steamers, while other craft, large and small, including a couple of white transports from the Philippines, lay at anchor here and there off shore. It was some time before the Eastern Queen could get docked, and even after that was accomplished, a lone Chinaman who had been waiting on the wharf for an hour was detained that much longer by men with the initials U. S. C. on their caps, before he could board the steamer and welcome his wife and child.

7“This is thy son,” announced the happy Lae Choo.

8Hom Hing lifted the child, felt of his little body and limbs, gazed into his face with proud and joyous eyes; then turned inquiringly to a customs officer at his elbow.

9“That’s a fine boy you have there,” said the man. “Where was he born?”

10“In China,” answered Hom Hing, swinging the Little One on his right shoulder, preparatory to leading his wife off the steamer.

11“Ever been to America before?”

12“No, not he,” answered the father with a happy laugh.

13The customs officer beckoned to another.

14“This little fellow,” said he, “is visiting America for the first time.”

15The other customs officer stroked his chin reflectively.

16“Good day,” said Hom Hing.

17“Wait!” commanded one of the officers. “You cannot go just yet.”

18“What more now?” asked Hom Hing.

19“I’m afraid,” said the first customs officer, “that we cannot allow the boy to go ashore. There is nothing in the papers that you have shown us—your wife’s papers and your own—having any bearing upon the child.”

20“There was no child when the papers were made out,” returned Hom Hing. He spoke calmly; but there was apprehension in his eyes and in his tightening grip on his son.

21“What is it? What is it?” quavered Lae Choo, who understood a little English.

22The second customs officer regarded her pityingly.

23“I don’t like this part of the business,” he muttered.

24The first officer turned to Hom Hing and in an official tone of voice, said:

25“Seeing that the boy has no certificate entitling him to admission to this country you will have to leave him with us.”

26“Leave my boy!” exclaimed Hom Hing.

27“Yes; he will be well taken care of, and just as soon as we can hear from Washington he will be handed over to you.”

28“But,” protested Hom Hing, “he is my son.”

29“We have no proof,” answered the man with a shrug of his shoulders; “and even if so we cannot let him pass without orders from the Government.”

30“He is my son,” reiterated Hom Hing, slowly and solemnly. “I am a Chinese merchant and have been in business in San Francisco for many years. When my wife told to me one morning that she dreamed of a green tree with spreading branches and one beautiful red flower growing thereon, I answered her that I wished my son to be born in our country, and for her to prepare to go to China. My wife complied with my wish. After my son was born my mother fell sick and my wife nursed and cared for her; then my father, too, fell sick, and my wife also nursed and cared for him. For twenty moons my wife care for and nurse the old people, and when they die they bless her and my son, and I send for her to return to me. I had no fear of trouble. I was a Chinese merchant and my son was my son.”

31“Very good, Hom Hing,” replied the first officer. “Nevertheless, we take your son.”

32“No, you not take him; he my son too.”

33It was Lae Choo. Snatching the child from his father’s arms she held and covered him with her own.

34The officers conferred together for a few moments; then one drew Hom Hing aside and spoke in his ear.

35Resignedly Hom Hing bowed his head, then approached his wife. “’Tis the law,” said he, speaking in Chinese, “and ’twill be but for a little while—until tomorrow’s sun arises.”

36“You, too,” reproached Lae Choo in a voice eloquent with pain. But accustomed to obedience she yielded the boy to her husband, who in turn delivered him to the first officer. The Little One protested lustily against the transfer; but his mother covered her face with her sleeve and his father silently led her away. Thus was the law of the land complied with.

II

37Day was breaking. Lae Choo, who had been awake all night, dressed herself, then awoke her husband.

38“’Tis the morn,” she cried. “Go, bring our son.”

39The man rubbed his eyes and arose upon his elbow so that he could see out of the window. A pale star was visible in the sky. The petals of a lily in a bowl on the window-sill were unfurled.

40“’Tis not yet time,” said he, laying his head down again.

41“Not yet time. Ah, all the time that I lived before yesterday is not so much as the time that has been since my little one was taken from me.”

42The mother threw herself down beside the bed and covered her face.

43Hom Hing turned on the light, and touching his wife’s bowed head with a sympathetic hand inquired if she had slept.

44“Slept!” she echoed, weepingly. “Ah, how could I close my eyes with my arms empty of the little body that has filled them every night for more than twenty moons! You do not know—man—what it is to miss the feel of the little fingers and the little toes and the soft round limbs of your little one. Even in the darkness his darling eyes used to shine up to mine, and often have I fallen into slumber with his pretty babble at my ear. And now, I see him not; I touch him not; I hear him not. My baby, my little fat one!”

45“Now! Now! Now!” consoled Hom Hing, patting his wife’s shoulder reassuringly; “there is no need to grieve so; he will soon gladden you again. There cannot be any law that would keep a child from its mother!”

46Lae Choo dried her tears.

47“You are right, my husband,” she meekly murmured. She arose and stepped about the apartment, setting things to rights. The box of presents she had brought for her California friends had been opened the evening before; and silks, embroideries, carved ivories, ornamental lacquer-ware, brasses, camphorwood boxes, fans, and chinaware were scattered around in confused heaps. In the midst of unpacking the thought of her child in the hands of strangers had overpowered her, and she had left everything to crawl into bed and weep.

48Having arranged her gifts in order she stepped out on to the deep balcony.

49The star had faded from view and there were bright streaks in the western sky. Lae Choo looked down the street and around. Beneath the flat occupied by her and her husband were quarters for a number of bachelor Chinamen, and she could hear them from where she stood, taking their early morning breakfast. Below their dining-room was her husband’s grocery store. Across the way was a large restaurant. Last night it had been resplendent with gay colored lanterns and the sound of music. The rejoicings over “the completion of the moon,” by Quong Sum’s firstborn, had been long and loud, and had caused her to tie a handkerchief over her ears. She, a bereaved mother, had it not in her heart to rejoice with other parents. This morning the place was more in accord with her mood. It was still and quiet. The revelers had dispersed or were asleep.

50A roly-poly woman in black sateen, with long pendant earrings in her ears, looked up from the street below and waved her a smiling greeting. It was her old neighbor, Kuie Hoe, the wife of the gold embosser, Mark Sing. With her was a little boy in yellow jacket and lavender pantaloons. Lae Choo remembered him as a baby. She used to like to play with him in those days when she had no child of her own. What a long time ago that seemed! She caught her breath in a sigh, and laughed instead.

51“Why are you so merry?” called her husband from within.

52“Because my Little One is coming home,” answered Lae Choo. “I am a happy mother—a happy mother.”

53She pattered into the room with a smile on her face.

54The noon hour had arrived. The rice was steaming in the bowls and a fragrant dish of chicken and bamboo shoots was awaiting Hom Hing. Not for one moment had Lae Choo paused to rest during the morning hours; her activity had been ceaseless. Every now and again, however, she had raised her eyes to the gilded clock on the curiously carved mantelpiece. Once, she had exclaimed:

55“Why so long, oh! why so long?” Then apostrophizing herself: “Lae Choo, be happy. The Little One is coming! The Little One is coming!” Several times she burst into tears and several times she laughed aloud.

56Hom Hing entered the room; his arms hung down by his side.

57“The Little One!” shrieked Lae Choo.

58“They bid me call tomorrow.”

59With a moan the mother sank to the floor.

60The noon hour passed. The dinner remained on the table.

III

61The winter rains were over: the spring had come to California, flushing the hills with green and causing an ever-changing pageant of flowers to pass over them. But there was no spring in Lae Choo’s heart, for the Little One remained away from her arms. He was being kept in a mission. White women were caring for him, and though for one full moon he had pined for his mother and refused to be comforted he was now apparently happy and contented. Five moons or five months had gone by since the day he had passed with Lae Choo through the Golden Gate; but the great Government at Washington still delayed sending the answer which would return him to his parents.

62Hom Hing was disconsolately rolling up and down the balls in his abacus box when a keen-faced young man stepped into his store.

63“What news?” asked the Chinese merchant.

64“This!” The young man brought forth a typewritten letter. Hom Hing read the words:

65“Re Chinese child, alleged to be the son of Hom Hing, Chinese merchant, doing business at 425 Clay street, San Francisco.

66“Same will have attention as soon as possible.”

67Hom Hing returned the letter, and without a word continued his manipulation of the counting machine.

68“Have you anything to say?” asked the young man.

69“Nothing. They have sent the same letter fifteen times before. Have you not yourself showed it to me?”

70“True!” The young man eyed the Chinese merchant furtively. He had a proposition to make and he was pondering whether or not the time was opportune.

71“How is your wife?” he inquired solicitously—and diplomatically.

72Hom Hing shook his head mournfully.

73“She seems less every day,” he replied. “Her food she takes only when I bid her and her tears fall continually. She finds no pleasure in dress or flowers and cares not to see her friends. Her eyes stare all night. I think before another moon she will pass into the land of spirits.”

74“No!” exclaimed the young man, genuinely startled.

75“If the boy not come home I lose my wife sure,” continued Hom Hing with bitter sadness.

76“It’s not right,” cried the young man indignantly. Then he made his proposition.

77The Chinese father’s eyes brightened exceedingly.

78“Will I like you to go to Washington and make them give you the paper to restore my son?” cried he. “How can you ask when you know my heart’s desire?”

79“Then,” said the young fellow, “I will start next week. I am anxious to see this thing through if only for the sake of your wife’s peace of mind.”

80“I will call her. To hear what you think to do will make her glad,” said Hom Hing.

81He called a message to Lae Choo upstairs through a tube in the wall.

82In a few moments she appeared, listless, wan, and hollow-eyed; but when her husband told her the young lawyer’s suggestion she became as one electrified; her form straightened, her eyes glistened; the color flushed to her cheeks.

83“Oh,” she cried, turning to James Clancy, “You are a hundred man good!”

84The young man felt somewhat embarrassed; his eyes shifted a little under the intense gaze of the Chinese mother.

85“Well, we must get your boy for you,” he responded. “Of course”—turning to Hom Hing—“it will cost a little money. You can’t get fellows to hurry the Government for you without gold in your pocket.”

86Hom Hing stared blankly for a moment. Then: “How much do you want, Mr. Clancy?” he asked quietly.

87“Well, I will need at least five hundred to start with.”

88Hom Hing cleared his throat.

89“I think I told to you the time I last paid you for writing letters for me and seeing the Custom boss here that nearly all I had was gone!”

90“Oh, well then we won’t talk about it, old fellow. It won’t harm the boy to stay where he is, and your wife may get over it all right.”

91“What that you say?” quavered Lae Choo.

92James Clancy looked out of the window.

93“He says,” explained Hom Hing in English, “that to get our boy we have to have much money.”

94“Money! Oh, yes.”

95Lae Choo nodded her head.

96“I have not got the money to give him.”

97For a moment Lae Choo gazed wonderingly from one face to the other; then, comprehension dawning upon her, with swift anger, pointing to the lawyer, she cried: “You not one hundred man good; you just common white man.”

98“Yes, ma’am,” returned James Clancy, bowing and smiling ironically.

99Hom Hing pushed his wife behind him and addressed the lawyer again: “I might try,” said he, “to raise something; but five hundred—it is not possible.”

100“What about four?”

101“I tell you I have next to nothing left and my friends are not rich.”

102“Very well!”

103The lawyer moved leisurely toward the door, pausing on its threshold to light a cigarette.

104“Stop, white man; white man, stop!”

105Lae Choo, panting and terrified, had started forward and now stood beside him, clutching his sleeve excitedly.

106“You say you can go to get paper to bring my Little One to me if Hom Hing give you five hundred dollars?”

107The lawyer nodded carelessly; his eyes were intent upon the cigarette which would not take the fire from the match.

108“Then you go get paper. If Hom Hing not can give you five hundred dollars—I give you perhaps what more that much.”

109She slipped a heavy gold bracelet from her wrist and held it out to the man. Mechanically he took it.

110“I go get more!”

111She scurried away, disappearing behind the door through which she had come.

112“Oh, look here, I can’t accept this,” said James Clancy, walking back to Hom Hing and laying down the bracelet before him.

113“It’s all right,” said Hom Hing, seriously, “pure China gold. My wife’s parent give it to her when we married.”

114“But I can’t take it anyway,” protested the young man.

115“It is all same as money. And you want money to go to Washington,” replied Hom Hing in a matter of fact manner.

116“See, my jade earrings—my gold buttons—my hairpins—my comb of pearl and my rings—one, two, three, four, five rings; very good—very good—all same much money. I give them all to you. You take and bring me paper for my Little One.”

117Lae Choo piled up her jewels before the lawyer.

118Hom Hing laid a restraining hand upon her shoulder. “Not all, my wife,” he said in Chinese. He selected a ring—his gift to Lae Choo when she dreamed of the tree with the red flower. The rest of the jewels he pushed toward the white man.

119“Take them and sell them,” said he. “They will pay your fare to Washington and bring you back with the paper.”

120For one moment James Clancy hesitated. He was not a sentimental man; but something within him arose against accepting such payment for his services.

121“They are good, good,” pleadingly asserted Lae Choo, seeing his hesitation.

122Whereupon he seized the jewels, thrust them into his coat pocket, and walked rapidly away from the store.

IV

123Lae Choo followed after the missionary woman through the mission nursery school. Her heart was beating so high with happiness that she could scarcely breathe. The paper had come at last—the precious paper which gave Hom Hing and his wife the right to the possession of their own child. It was ten months now since he had been taken from them—ten months since the sun had ceased to shine for Lae Choo.

124The room was filled with children—most of them wee tots, but none so wee as her own. The mission woman talked as she walked. She told Lae Choo that little Kim, as he had been named by the school, was the pet of the place, and that his little tricks and ways amused and delighted every one. He had been rather difficult to manage at first and had cried much for his mother; “but children so soon forget, and after a month he seemed quite at home and played around as bright and happy as a bird.”

125“Yes,” responded Lae Choo. “Oh, yes, yes!”

126But she did not hear what was said to her. She was walking in a maze of anticipatory joy.

127“Wait here, please,” said the mission woman, placing Lae Choo in a chair. “The very youngest ones are having their breakfast.”

128She withdrew for a moment—it seemed like an hour to the mother—then she reappeared leading by the hand a little boy dressed in blue cotton overalls and white-soled shoes. The little boy’s face was round and dimpled and his eyes were very bright.

129“Little One, ah, my Little One!” cried Lae Choo.

130She fell on her knees and stretched her hungry arms toward her son.

131But the Little One shrunk from her and tried to hide himself in the folds of the white woman’s skirt.

132“Go’way, go’way!” he bade his mother.

Text from Mrs. Spring Fragrance (1912), as kept by Project Gutenberg. Paragraph numbers are ours, and run straight through all four parts.

Part 2

Questions on “In the Land of the Free”

Four words the questions use

Irony. When what happens, or what is said, turns out to be the opposite of what was expected or meant. A title can be ironic too.

Narrator. The voice telling the story. Here the narrator is not a character, but a voice outside the story.

Tone. The attitude a writer takes toward what she is describing: serious, joking, bitter, tender. In writing, you hear it in the words chosen.

Inference. Something the story does not say in plain words, but that you can work out from what it does say.

Thirteen questions on “In the Land of the Free,” in the kinds the test uses. Press Check after each one. If you miss, the page tells you why the answer you chose is tempting, and you can try again.

1. The story opens with Lae Choo telling her son: “There is thy home for years to come. It is very beautiful and thou wilt be very happy there” (paragraph 1). Why begin with so much hope?

2. Why do the customs officers refuse to let the boy come ashore (paragraphs 19 to 29)?

3. The second customs officer looks at Lae Choo “pityingly” and mutters, “I don’t like this part of the business” (paragraphs 22 and 23). What does this show?

4. In paragraph 30, Hom Hing explains his wife’s dream, and how she cared for his sick parents in China. Why does he tell the officers all this?

5. Part I ends: “Thus was the law of the land complied with” (paragraph 36). Complied with means obeyed. What is the tone of this sentence?

6. Choose the words that best complete the sentence. drop-down

In paragraphs 50 to 52, when Lae Choo “caught her breath in a sigh, and laughed instead,” and calls herself “a happy mother,” she is .

7. In Part III, Hom Hing says of the government’s letter: “They have sent the same letter fifteen times before” (paragraph 69). What does this show?

8. When he learns there is no money, the lawyer says: “It won’t harm the boy to stay where he is, and your wife may get over it all right” (paragraph 90). What does this show about him?

9. Lae Choo first calls the lawyer “a hundred man good.” Later she says: “You not one hundred man good; you just common white man” (paragraph 97). What does she mean?

10. When Lae Choo piles up all her jewels, Hom Hing keeps back one ring (paragraph 118). Why that one?

11. In Part IV, which two details show that the boy has been changed by his ten months at the mission? choose two

12. Put these events in order. Choose 1 for the first and 6 for the last. put in order

Lae Choo gives the lawyer her jewels.
The officers take the boy from his father on the ship.
The boy hides in the mission woman’s skirt.
Hom Hing comes home at noon without him: “They bid me call tomorrow.”
The paper comes from Washington.
The same letter arrives for the fifteenth time.

13. Why is the title, “In the Land of the Free,” ironic?

Part 3

The newer one · one click away

The Loudest Voice

Shirley Abramowitz, a Jewish girl in New York City, has the loudest voice on her block, and everyone tells her to be quiet. Then her school needs a loud voice for its Christmas play, and her parents disagree about whether she should be in it.

Read it free at the Library of America ↗

On that page, the story itself appears below a short introduction, and a “click here” link opens it as a PDF (or open it directly). It is six pages, about 2,300 words. The questions give page numbers from those pages. The same page links to a recording of Paley reading the story aloud.

Still in copyright, so it lives on their site, not ours.

Before you read it

Written by
Grace Paley (1922–2007), born in the Bronx to Jewish immigrants from Ukraine. She lived most of her life in Greenwich Village, and wrote short stories about New York women and families.
First printed
In her first book, The Little Disturbances of Man (1959).
Where and when
A Jewish immigrant neighborhood of New York, most likely the Bronx where Paley grew up, probably in the 1930s, when Paley was a girl.
How to read it

Paley moves fast, and she leaves a lot for you to fill in. People talk over each other, and she does not always say who is speaking. Read it once for fun, and once slowly. The words below explain the references a reader in 1959 would have known.

Words and references you will meet

dumbwaiter
a small elevator for carrying things, not people, between floors of an apartment building
“In the grave it will be quiet”
meaning: there will be time enough to be quiet when you are dead
stamina
the strength to keep going for a long time
pogrom
a violent attack on Jews, often with the government looking away, as happened in Russia and eastern Europe. Many Jewish families came to New York to escape them.
idealism
belief in high ideas and how the world should be
an iota
the smallest bit
wig
Orthodox Jewish married women cover their hair; some wear a wig.
“a stranger in Egypt”
The Bible tells Jews to be kind to strangers, “for ye were strangers in the land of Egypt.” Shirley feels sorry for the Christmas tree, alone on a Jewish street.
prayer shawl
a fringed shawl Jewish men wear to pray
sheiks
Arab chiefs; the boys playing soldiers are costumed as Arabs
“The rest is silence”
the last words of Hamlet, in Shakespeare’s play
“Hear, O Israel”
the first words of the Shema, the most important Jewish prayer

Part 3, continued

Questions on “The Loudest Voice”

Seven questions on “The Loudest Voice.” Have the story open in another tab or window, and go back to the page each question names.

14. The story opens: “every window is a mother’s mouth bidding the street shut up, go skate somewhere else, come home” (page 270). What does this picture tell you about the place?

15. Why does Mr. Hilton choose Shirley for the play (pages 270 and 271)?

16. Shirley’s mother is upset about the Christmas play. She calls it “a creeping pogrom, that our children learn a lot of lies” (page 272). A pogrom was a violent attack on Jews in Russia and eastern Europe. What is she afraid of?

17. Shirley’s father answers: “Does it hurt Shirley to learn to speak up? It does not. So maybe someday she won’t live between the kitchen and the shop” (page 273). What does he hope the play will do for her?

18. After the play, Mrs. Kornbluh says that the few Christian children “got very small parts or no part at all” (page 275). What is ironic about this?

19. Who is telling this story, and when?

20. At the end, Shirley says a Jewish prayer, “Hear, O Israel,” and prays “for everybody…and all the lonesome Christians.” What does the ending show about her?

Part 4

The two together

On the test, some passages come in pairs, and some questions ask about both at once. These three do the same.

21. In both stories, a child is placed in the hands of an American institution: a mission home in one, a public school in the other. Which statement best compares what happens?

22. How is the tone of the two stories different?

23. Which statement about language fits the two stories?

Part 5

For talking it over

These have no single right answer. They are for class, or for a friend, or for thinking about on your own. Each one has a hint, folded away, for anyone who wants a place to start.

  1. The second customs officer says, “I don’t like this part of the business,” and does it anyway. What should he have done? Have you ever had to follow a rule at work that you thought was wrong?
    A place to start

    What would it have cost him to refuse? What did it cost the family that he did not?

  2. This story was written in 1909. Families are still separated today by immigration rules, at borders and in detention. What is the same as in the story? What is different?
  3. The lawyer takes the jewels, and the paper does come. Is he a villain? A businessman? Both?
    A place to start

    Look at paragraph 120: “something within him arose against accepting such payment.” And then he takes it.

  4. Shirley’s mother and father disagree about the play. Who is right? Can they both be?
    A place to start

    The mother is afraid of losing something. The father is hoping to gain something. List what each one is thinking about.

  5. “Christmas…the whole piece of goods…they own it,” says Shirley’s mother. “What belongs to history belongs to all men,” says her father. Who owns a holiday?
  6. What do you want the children in your life to keep from where you, or your family, came from? What do you hope they learn here?

Part 6

Write about it

Choose one of these and write in the box below. Put the number of the one you chose at the top. Aim for four or five paragraphs. The box saves your writing as you go, under your code, and you can send it to Myles when it is ready.

  1. 1. Two children

    In both stories, an American institution shapes a child. Compare what the boy in “In the Land of the Free” and Shirley in “The Loudest Voice” gain and lose. Use details from both stories.

    This is close to the test’s essay: two texts, and your judgment about them, supported by evidence from both. Start with one sentence that says how the two are alike or different. Give two or three details from each story. End with what you think explains the difference.

  2. 2. Keep and learn

    What do you want the young people in your life to keep from where you come from? What do you hope they learn here? Tell about one real moment when you felt the pull between the two.

    A moment is better than a list: a meal, a holiday, something a child said.

  3. 3. A letter

    Write the letter that the boy, grown up, might write to his mother, years after the day he said “Go’way.” Or write the letter Lae Choo might have sent to the government in Washington.

    Use what you know from the story. The boy would have been told about the ten months; he would not remember them.

☞ Quiz 6, relationships between ideas, practices comparing, and Quiz 8, connotation and tone, practices hearing the difference between a bitter voice and a joking one. Back to all the stories.

Answers to Parts 2, 3 and 4

1 B · 2 C · 3 D · 4 A · 5 C · 6 forcing herself to hope · 7 B · 8 D · 9 A · 10 C · 11 A and C · 12 (top to bottom) 4, 1, 6, 2, 5, 3 · 13 D · 14 A · 15 D · 16 B · 17 C · 18 A · 19 D · 20 B · 21 D · 22 A · 23 B