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GED Language Arts · Drill VII.13

Wordiness: the shorter version that says the same thing

Family VII: Grammar and usage

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Worked examples

Two examples

Example 1

______ the train was late, I missed the meeting.Choices: Due to the fact that  /  Because  /  Owing to the fact that
  1. All three choices mean the same thing.
  2. When they mean the same, the one with the fewest words is clearest.

Answer: Because the train was late, I missed the meeting.

Example 2

Please ______ the form by Friday.Choices: return back  /  return
  1. Return already means to send back.
  2. Return back says the same idea twice. Keep one.

Answer: Please return the form by Friday.

Where this is taught: Grammar: Start Here, Part 5: Choosing words

More practice: Quiz 42, Word choice · In your Kaplan book: Unit 1, Chapter 7, Lesson 1, “Strengthen Sentences”

The drill

Ten questions

How many:

In each sentence, open the drop-down and choose the words that make the sentence correct, the way the GED test asks. A few questions ask you to tap a whole sentence instead. Then press Check my answers at the bottom.In each sentence, circle the choice in the brackets that makes the sentence correct; where whole sentences are given, circle one. The answer key, with the reasoning, is on the last page.

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